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Post by Gregory Hewett on Oct 13, 2011 9:13:35 GMT 5.5
Please post your works of historical fictional here.
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Post by aleena on Oct 13, 2011 10:01:03 GMT 5.5
The Iceman Long ago, around 5,300 years ago, there lived a man known as known as The Hunter of the Alps. But, people mostly called him The Iceman. At his time, people like him were hunters and gatherers and they were quite good at hunting animals. The Iceman was hunting in the cold, dangerous, windy Alps of Europe. He was in for a tough adventure in his life, and he only has a little bit of his life left. The poor Iceman, extremely hungry and tired from the many days of hiking then hunting, hiking then hunting and that’s basically all he did. He had a lot of food for him and the rest of his clan, and he knew because of this he would be treated like a king. He hunted out in a cave but then a terrifying thing happened the next morning. Everything was gone. Everything was gone except for his small little hidden stone tool, which he used for emergencies. It was horrible! That was everything he had earned and lived for, and now “POOF” it’s gone. The Iceman was very sad. He went out of his little cave and saw a little deer prancing around. It looked so tempting that The Iceman, without even thinking, sprang towards it and took out his stone knife and then, he heard someone yelling at him. “Hey you! What are you doing? Trying to get my perfect kill?” The man shouted “I….I….I didn’t know you wanted it.” The Iceman stammered, acting really scared “Now, you get away from my kill” the man said. The Iceman clearly annoyed and offended replied, “You know what? I won’t. How about we share the deer and both get an equal piece?” the man thought about it. The Iceman seemed hopeful, and then the man replied, “You know what? How about we don’t?” Then he shot The Iceman in the shoulder, with his bow and arrow, shot the deer and ran off. The Iceman was in great pain. It hit him straight in the joint of his shoulder. He would still probably survive, but not for very long. The Iceman was still in a LOT of pain, but he was still able to hike a little longer. He was looking for another deer since he was starving. The arrow hit his left shoulder, so he was still able to hunt with his right arm. After around 20 minutes of walking, he saw it, a deer. He made sure no one was around and took it with his stone tool. He ate a nice big meal. The problem was that he had to hunt more food for his clan since he lost all of it. After a long day of pain the Iceman gave up on hunting food for his clan. He would have to go back empty handed. Having decided that, he fell asleep. Thinking that if he died someone would find him. The next morning he was dead. He must’ve died in his sleep because of that hard hit arrow. Meanwhile, at the clan site of the mean, gruff, man that the Iceman encountered the other day, he was thinking about The Iceman what had happened to him. He seemed a little concerned. But then he thought he should be okay, and even if the Iceman had died, he knew someone would find him and he wouldn’t be alone. ~Aleena ;D
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Post by kaviyan on Oct 13, 2011 10:02:01 GMT 5.5
Ice Man 5,300 years ago in the Alps is where a hunter called Ice Man lived. Ice man is just a name made by scientist. It was a hiking day and two couples were hiking in the Alps and there they found a frozen body with furry clothes which suits for snow. He also had a pouch with food and it contained wheat, barley and deer. And the hikers called the scientists. Almost everything was found from when he lived and how he lived but how he died is a mystery but we do have one big clue, it’s the arrow on his shoulder. I personally think this what happened but you don’t need to believe this. Ice man was a good hunter. He was a rough man. All he has with him was his weapons and his belongings. Ice man doesn’t have his own house, he considers whole Alps as his house. Ice man usually has enough food but today he had barley and wheat. He wanted something more, something non-veg and a deer would be good. He looked around walked and ran and finally there was a big and tasty deer standing in front of him. But he noticed that there was another hunter trying to get the deer and as the other hunter saw Ice Man, Ice Man knew there was going to be a fight. Ice Man slowly approaches to the deer and acts like the other hunter is not there. The other hunter shoots the deer and comes forward to take the deer’s flesh but Ice Man tries to steal the flesh the other hunter got mad and shoots Ice Man. As Ice Man was suffering to death he took some flesh and put it on his pouch so that when he is going to be found people will think that he didn’t steal the deer but he fought for it. Ice Man tried to get up but he could not. As he looked up at the sky, he knew this was his last day. He took out the arrowhead and stabbed himself even more and thought can’t even get a deer, then he died.
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Post by sihyun on Oct 13, 2011 10:02:23 GMT 5.5
The Last Days of the Hunter of the Alps It was a fine morning but colder than usual. The hunter “Iceman” got up and picked up his weapons and hi clothes. Now, gathering was not so good, so he had to catch anything to eat. He called his hunters “Hey!! Let’s go!”
They set off to the mountain. For a long time they couldn’t catch anything when they were tired of walking. “Iceman, I am tired, can we rest?” they asked. “No wait look!” he pointed to the bush they saw a deer. They followed and it leaded to more deer, they were lucky, they had to catch them. To catch animals which run fast, they used arrows.
Iceman was leading the deer closer to his hunters then Iceman cried, “Attack!”Countless arrows were on air, aiming for the deer, it was vicious how the deer were shot dead. They were happy to catch many of them and they also found some wheat and barley.
Iceman was happily walking back to the camp when his man shouted, “Iceman!!” when he turned around, it was too late. An arrow stuck on his shoulder, he was shot. “Wha… Aaaaaaaaaa!” Iceman screamed. Then he fell, and kept falling down…
He didn’t know how long he was unconscious. “Where am I? Is anyone there??!” Iceman shouted, but he only heard his voice. His wound was worse than it was, he tried pulling out the arrow and he did but arrowhead was completely stuck. He was crawling to find his way back to camp and trying to get help. When he looked up, he had no idea how he survived from that high fall.
After long time crawling, he decided to eat some. He was hurt but still, he was hungry. Deer meat, wheat, and barley. He was really thankful for that, and he thought that this might be his last meal.
He was shivering from the cold wind and he could still feel warm liquid dripping from his shoulder, each time the liquid dropped out, he felt weaker and weaker. He tried climbing up the cliff, but it was impossible he needed tools which he doesn’t have and it was too dangerous. then the pain stopped, it wasn’t cold anymore. Iceman died.
After 5,300 years a couple hiking in the mountain “Oh my god… what is this!?” “I…I don’t know… It looks like a dead…body!” “Maybe we should call the police…” They found the Iceman dead in the mountain armed with weapons and when scientists looked at his body, they found an arrowhead in his shoulder and the last meal he ate. He was not decayed, instead, because of the cold temperature, he’s body was frozen.
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Post by junyoung on Oct 13, 2011 10:02:58 GMT 5.5
Before 5,300 years ago, a hunter who lived in a small cave located in the mountain of the Alps came out for hunting in early morning. In his cave, the foods that he stored now were almost over. If he doesn’t spend a lot of time to get some animals/foods, he might’ve been dead.
He tried to stay closest to his cave, but then he notices that there aren’t any animals to hunt nearby the cave, so he decides to walk down into a deep forest to get some foods.
The hunter didn’t look so frightened. He was sure that he’ll have to get some foods. He went through the forest without any hesitation, and went his way. He was walking until the noon, then noticed something strange, ‘There should be animals around here,’ then thought he had to hurry back to his cave; but then, he saw couple of dears. Then hunter quickly took out his arrows, and then started to aim at the dears.
There were about 3 and 1 of them died. He quickly made up to the mountains, and then took out his dear meat (the one he caught), then ate it. After he ate meat, the other hunters shot an arrow on his shoulder (it might be because they wanted the meat), he fell down, and then the snow covered him for 5,300 years.
At 1991, a couple hiking got to find the iceman.
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Post by aran on Oct 13, 2011 10:03:56 GMT 5.5
The Iceman Aran Selhi Five thousand, three hundred years ago, on winter’s day when two hunters ate the last of their deer meat. They both went out looking for barley to hunt high up in the Alps, Europe. After a while, both of them started to get hungry again.
Then, the strangest thing happened to them: they found a golden deer and they both ran after it until the Iceman was left chasing it and the other got his bow & arrow out, aimed, and took five shots. The third shot went right in the Iceman’s shoulder. After a while in the snow, the Iceman ran away to a cave, and overnight, he died.
The last shot finally got the deer. He suddenly ran up to the deer, carried it to a safe spot to eat it. Unfortunately, the golden deer was poisonous to humans, so he died as well.
The Iceman was found in 1960 in the ice and the other hunter hasn’t been found yet even in modern day.
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Post by vikram on Oct 13, 2011 10:03:57 GMT 5.5
Ice Man This story takes place in the Alps in Europe 5300 years ago. The Ice Man just finished a meal involving deer and barley and was walking to his next destination
It was a bright day and the hunter was looking for his next meal. There it was a big juicy deer that could fill him up for three days. Then, a group of hunters from another clan were looking around for some food when they saw the Ice Man catching the deer. As soon as the Ice man struck the deer the group of other hunters shot their pointy arrows. Luckily, the Ice Man saw this and quickly dodged the arrows and hid behind a boulder and fought back hard until he exposed his right shoulder. Wthk! and an killer pain came upon him. The mountain started to have an avalanche! He quickly ran for a nearby cave shooting the hunters one by one. Then, he felt a rush of drops coming down his back and tripped over a stick and he fell down with a big loud clash.
The Ice Man felt it during the time of the avalanche and was so close to the cave. He felt the dripping it was poison and blood. He knew it he was dying and dying fast. The avalanche was close then it struck him hard. The Ice Man was hit into the cave and survived the avalanche, while the other hunters died and were taken by the storming rage of the avalanche.
During his last moments of life he rested while the poison was zooming through his body and he took a deep breath and he was heart struck. The Ice man couldn’t get out of the cave, so he died. The Ice man was found in 1991, his body still preserved within the walls of the cave. He became the thing that took the nowadays humans back into the past.
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Post by gower on Oct 13, 2011 10:06:16 GMT 5.5
Gower Rande 10-12-11 This is the history of what we know about the prehistoric “Iceman”. He is about 5,300 yrs old, from what scientists know, and he lived and was found in the in the Alps. He was hunting deer-like animals at the time, and then, out of nowhere, he got attacked by some wanderers in the snow. One jumped on him, but he shook him off. After that, he started to run away, but then he felt a searing pain in his shoulder; he got pierced with an arrow in his shoulder. The hunter was afraid of getting killed, so he hid in a cave overnight, long after the attackers had passed. Then a snowstorm blew in, and the hunter died from the cold, harsh weather. The snow soon preserved the body of the Iceman, leaving the man unharmed for millennia. Then in 1991, when the temperature was higher than usual, two hikers were walking by, and couldn’t help but notice the prehistoric Iceman’s features. His body, soon after the Iceman’s discovery, he was studied by scientists, telling them more about people of the Iceman’s time and how they lived.
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Post by bahar on Oct 13, 2011 10:17:50 GMT 5.5
The Hunter of The Alps
It was 5,300 years ago on a snowy winter day a hunter was hiking in one of the largest mountains on Earth. He came to the Alps he didn`t have anybody with him, he was all alone in the big enormous mountains by his own will because he was confident he didn`t need anyone to help him while he was hiking in the mountains because he had his knife in his pouch, a bag full of arrows and a bow o his back. Also of course he had his leopard skin dress covering his whole body and warming it up, a hat from bear skin to warm his head and face and he had fox skin boots on his legs and feet to make sure they don`t freeze. Now his adventure was about to begin. After 6 hours of hiking he started to get tired and really hungry. After walking a little bit more he saw a deer close by. He was really joyous because he was starving for food. But something seemed wrong. The place didn`t smell like normal deer. There was an unfamiliar scent around but he didn`t know what it was. He was now walking very carefully to the deer. One loud and harsh noise could scare the deer away and then he would be left all alone in the mountains with no food left. Right when he was about to attack the deer from the rear he saw something. He saw another hunter who was also hungry to death and alone.
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